would be very interested in a plain text version of this for those of us who print at home.
never tried solitary defilement before but this looks like it could be a good time and I’d like to support but would kill my printer in present format!
This is definitely on my to-do list. I will have a print friendly version available when I release v2.0 and the physical copies. I'll be grinding like crazy these next 2 weeks I have off from work. Huge compliment coming from you, thanks a lot! I would love to have a piece of art from you in my book!
pg 66 Signs of the Undercity table - #6 what is a "rat line" and can they "behave oddly"? Are they ropes that are moving/swinging more than they should, or something like that?
A series of ropes. I'll change that up, and fix the rest. So far I'm caught up with your edits. I'm wrapping up the Heart Chapter and will be uploading v1.8
Pg 50 - check the numbering of the Quick Room Generator tables. Seem to be missing table #3. Also, do you roll on table #1 twice (first for size, and then a second time for shape?)
Amazing content. Take a look at how the pages are numbered. Ideally for print, the page numbers should alternate left-right-left-right so that they are always on the outside corner of the book as you flip through it.
Awesome looking zine. I play my rpg's using a e-ink device. To make this work, the pdf needs, at a bare minimum, a TOC with links. Bookmarks make it even better. Otherwise it's such a hassle to use the pdf that I probably won't use it. I went through my own copies and added links and bookmarks. If you're interested I could send these to you with the changes.
That is theultimate goal. I myself am an analog player, so I understand completely. Thank you, it's been quite the learning curve. I was considering running a Kickstarter but that seems so overwhelming and I have no idea how to make a beautiful page like these developers do. One way or another there will be physical copies in the near future. Glad you like it and I greatly appreciate the support!
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Going to grab this for sure when 2.0 comes out!
would be very interested in a plain text version of this for those of us who print at home.
never tried solitary defilement before but this looks like it could be a good time and I’d like to support but would kill my printer in present format!
This is definitely on my to-do list. I will have a print friendly version available when I release v2.0 and the physical copies. I'll be grinding like crazy these next 2 weeks I have off from work. Huge compliment coming from you, thanks a lot! I would love to have a piece of art from you in my book!
I’d be happy to send you something to use. I’m at castlegrief@proton.me or on discord @castlegrief
pg 66 Signs of the Undercity table - #6 what is a "rat line" and can they "behave oddly"? Are they ropes that are moving/swinging more than they should, or something like that?
A series of ropes. I'll change that up, and fix the rest. So far I'm caught up with your edits. I'm wrapping up the Heart Chapter and will be uploading v1.8
I would like to credit you inside the book. If you're okay with it, drop the name you wish to be credited by. I'll upload v1.8 after your response
That's not necessary but if you insist...Thank you!
R. Pickard
pg 65 - Rumors & Whispers - #2 "or something wearing him." - unclear meaning.
pg 65 - Rumors & Whispers - #16 - "no ransom." - does this mean there was no ransom demanded or the town can't afford the ransom demanded?
Pg 50 - check the numbering of the Quick Room Generator tables. Seem to be missing table #3. Also, do you roll on table #1 twice (first for size, and then a second time for shape?)
Roll twice. Added table 3. I'll have an update here shortly
pg 37 - Advancement and Growth - second paragraph - "Each improvement 'reflect' not heroism..." - should be 'reflects'.
Pg 26 - City Rest and Recovery - last word "consquence" - spelling.
Pg 23 - 2nd para - "sparce" - correct spelling is "sparse"
Pg 24 - Find a Location Move box - Miss - "acces" - spelling
Thank you for finding these. This community has been great with helping clean up the typos.
They must like you and/or your work.
Amazing content. Take a look at how the pages are numbered. Ideally for print, the page numbers should alternate left-right-left-right so that they are always on the outside corner of the book as you flip through it.
Brilliant! Thank you for this feedback, I will adjust that for this coming release later tonight. I appreciate you!
I am glad to help.
Awesome looking zine. I play my rpg's using a e-ink device. To make this work, the pdf needs, at a bare minimum, a TOC with links. Bookmarks make it even better. Otherwise it's such a hassle to use the pdf that I probably won't use it. I went through my own copies and added links and bookmarks. If you're interested I could send these to you with the changes.
That would be absolutely amazing!
Is there a way to contact you? Doesn’t look like itch.io has a pm feature.
You can reach me on discord.
https://discord.gg/NjfZEWvkY
When I went to purchase, it has only paypal, which I don't do. Is there a credit card option?
I just enabled it, I'm hoping it works. Let me know if you end up trying it.
That worked. Thanks!
Awesome! Feel free to join the discord if you want!
https://discord.gg/Pn8r2vXUk
This looks amazing! Will there be a POD option in the future or a physical version of any kind?
That is the ultimate goal. I myself am an analog player, so I understand completely. Thank you, it's been quite the learning curve. I was considering running a Kickstarter but that seems so overwhelming and I have no idea how to make a beautiful page like these developers do. One way or another there will be physical copies in the near future. Glad you like it and I greatly appreciate the support!
Fantastic. Ill be there day one! The plight of the analog gamer. Its nice to share the pain isnt it :)
All the space, the weight, but damn are they beautiful. It is nice to share the pain ☺️
I am very much looking forward to a copy that I can hold in my hands and relish the page turning.
So far, though, I’m loving the digital copy - superb job!
Thank you very much! I am excited to get this to v2.0 and get physical copies in everyone's hands!